Emma was a girl who loves reading fiction. So, she was one of the members of café that can share some fictions and she was also one of the active members in there. In there, her favorite writer is ‘BLUESKY.’ One day, BLUESKY wrote something. The title was “At Sung Woo Resort.” In the introduction, it said that “This is a story I heard from my friend and I changed a little bit. I think this is an awesome story so I want to share this with you guys. Enjoy your time^^.” Emma was so excited and she started reading the story.
It was a dark, storming night.... Do Kyung, Chae Lim and Ji Woo went Sung woo resort.
“OMG! The opening is so cool!!!” Emma shouted and she continued reading the story.
There is a skiing area! They are snowboarding at there. There were just 5 people. One person is a man who help ride lift, and another one is an African from Tanzania. John, the helper seems to be afraid of African. African has a small eyes and he is very tall and chubby. Jay, the African is starting at his cell phones waiting for the lift. Do Kyung, Ji Woo and Chae Lim ride same lift with African. All three girls are also afraid of him. Lift was going upper and upper. Suddenly, the lift stopped.
Emma was really excited and she was surprised that this story is so absorbing. ‘This story is getting more funny! Hmm…… What will happen next?’ Emma thought.
Few minutes later, announcer turns on the microphone and said, "Announcement from Sung woo resort. The weather is so bad. So the lift stopped. We are working hard to rind the reason and to fix it. So, the people who are now riding the lift please calm down and wait for a few minutes. We will fix it as soon as we can. Sorry.”
After the announcement, the African jumped out from the lift. While he jumped, he said strange words. Everyone was shocked. They were so shocked that they fainted.
She continued reading the story but the story is getting little bit differently. It seems that other people wrote this part. “Umm……. It’s little bit weird but…….” Anyway, she continued.
When they woke up, they were still on the lift. Their bodies were all frozen. So they were stacked to the lift. They asked for help but there was no one in the resort. There was a PA name Park June Sub passing. He tried to rescue them. But he was too short and couldn't reach to girls.
He just grabbed the lift and has ticked to the lift. Then, the lift fell because of new person. But it's good! If the lift fell down, they reached on the ground! Everyone clapped! And nobody hurt! But…… How about Jay? He went to the In Choen Airport for leave this cold Heongsung.
And June Sub PA and 3 girls take the car and arrived each home!
Emma finished reading the story and mumbled. “Eh, it was cool in the beginning but it’s little bit boring in the end. I hate happy ending. I expected that maybe an African do bad things to the girls. Anyway, it was quite cool story.” Then, Emma started writing the review for BLUESKY.
“Wow! It was sort of cool story. However, it’s ending is little bit boring. If you don’t mind, I want to change it to something unexpected. Anyway, I always love your story and please write many stories in this café! Than you for your great story.”
Original story the purple part is from DoKyung's blog :
Excellent work. I like how you keep the story going by having Emma stop and think what the reader might also be thinking. The weird parts work much better that way. All in all, very nice formatting and nice work with the metafiction. Maybe some sort of picture would help.
ReplyDelete